Friday 31 July 2020
Tooth people
Miles hates bedtime. Especially brushing his teeth, but this time it was different. He could see a bunch of tiny people coming out of the tooth paste. Jumping all over his tooth brush, one screamed “Open wide”, Miles was terrified. He opened his mouth and held his toothbrush up to his teeth and all the little people hoped on his teeth and started dancing. Leaping and hopping around soon enough Miles teeth were clean. The were so shiny. Miles thanked the people and went tell his parents everything, they thought he was crazy.
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Hi bailey
ReplyDeletethis was a really funny story especially at the end with the parents maybe next time you could add a picture if can draw or find one
Hi bailey
ReplyDeleteI like your story it made me laugh I like the end part.
Maybe you could add a picture or draw one in your next story you do about Miles.
Kia Ora Bailey. It is really funny how the teeth people started to dance as mile's teeth started to whiten. This makes me think of a time where I brushed my teeth for longer than 2 minutes. Next time when an object is mile's, remember to add an apostrophe. Do you mind if your teeth are yellow?
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